Wow... :) thank u much!

Wow! Meritable poem! The rhythm and flow of it are superb. 5/5

WOW. You sure do put my poetry to shame. Great Work. I love your thought process.

My style in almost every poem is to rhyme and keep the flow perfect. I feel the great writers can get the same message across while rhyming as others do without. This was a unique poem and the word play was excellent. anybody can write a 6 line poem and have somebody give them a 5/5 but this one earns it nice work

Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Amazing flow rhythm & rhyme sharing in a general way mostly the dark past

You really have great style
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Love it

Especially;
"Extinguished soul in a tiny frame.
Keeping. Weeping. Sweeping away-
Raped. Escaped. But still remains."
And, the last line is like BOOM

Very catchy. Very Nice. Amazing poem

Wow check out that awesome rhythm! It's like "punch punch pow!" Very very effective with great use of vocab, rhyme and varied stanza length. One line that jumped out at me for a reason I can't put my finger on was "make up the game but never win." It was just awesome. If I could give this a 6 I would. Definitely going into my list of favourite poems and you're now on my list of favourite authors. Thanks for this one!