To Fly.

by Dreamofolwin   Apr 7, 2009


I want to fly up in the sky..
Above this world and see if I,
Can soar to heights Ive never known,
My destiny unsure, unknown.

A bird is free from many things...
Its heart can find a song to sing,
Above this world of pain and woe,
From higher heights it looks below.

But I am a bird with broken wings..
Whose heart just has no song to sing,
Imprisioned, captured here below,
THE higher heights it cannot know.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    You did an awesome job on this piece. I was drawn into it right away and related to exactly what you wrote.
    Graet job!
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    Easy and quick, starts excited and motivated, then becomes sad and a bit of a downer. Do not get me wrong, this is not a bad thing, its truly a really well written poem and truely makes one think about limitations we has humans really have, how much pain is in the world and how much we all wish to be about the cruel ways of the world.

  • 15 years ago

    by SYLA

    Great poem [:
    i had lines like that in my head,
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    This is a good poem. Its quick to read and easy to understand with a good flow. I enjoyed it alot and got what you were trying to say. Excellent writing.

    5/5

    Ashley.

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