I don't think the ending is as powerful as it could be . The second last stanza is actually better than the last . The flow was good for the most part , and the rhymes fit decently . I don't have any other suggestions .. I think this is really easy to relate to and really well done . 5<5

Excellent flow andd rhyme. the choice of words were simple but i could fell the emotion you tried to put in it.

verrrrryyyy nice work hunn.
i loved it.

5/5
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This is a grate write.I love the way you blamed him and called him a lier and then took the blame on yourself, I love the honesty.5/5

Pass the vodka,
around once again,
because anything else,
just makes my head spin.

*I've noticed that in a lot of your poems you talk about alcohol or something close to it. I just thought that was interesting. Anywho I loved the title of this. I think it fit the poem well and was something orignal. I didn't like your ending much, because I've heard something similar in a song. That was kinda disappointing because your poems are always so refreshing and filled with new ideas. But I do like how hard hitting your words are. That's one thing you're great with, diction. Always exciting and well done. Another good poem deary. Your talents amaze me :) Nik*