"Words locked up in her chest,"
`This was a great line, well worded.. locked was a great word to use here.. it fit perfectly.

"Words at the tip of her tongue,
She doesn't understand why she's feeling so numb."
`I noticed words are already being repeated for example words and feeling, make sure you dont do that too often...you portray your feelings and emotions nicely though, and I think a lot of people can relate to being numb and pushing everyone else away because they just dont understand.

"Words crumble at her attempts to explain,"
`I loved everything about this line but again the repetitiveness of "words"

Overall a very sad piece, youve really portrayed your feelings and emotions well throughout this piece.. the ending is deep and full of sadness.

Well done.
5/5.

Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]

This is a very powerful and moving poem..it made me cry just reading it. Ive never been this far but i know what depression can do to you. It takes away the "you" and your not the person you where anymore. I got this feeling reading your poem, which is so well written, and expressed . Take care, lol.