Foolish Complexities

by KeyxMashingxParody   Apr 8, 2009


Abandoned is the heart of a fool,
Yet the mind presumes it's process.
Fools are only foolish when fooled,
Yet minds never cease their purpose.

Debating the riddle of life,
A fool is only the cause of this.
Lost within their own mind,
A deep, blackened, ignorant abyss.

The fools that address our country,
The fools living right next door.
A neighbor to the blind eye of freedom,
A term overused, abused and sore.

Intensely the brain of this world,
Will fade into a foolish stand.
Already over halfway to recession,
Becomes worse after each command.

A night in agnostic trials,
Confronting fears from a waif.
As the fears become understood,
Most could agree their safe.

Yet in this twisted spiral of fools,
One thing is sure to be heard.
The one cry of a fool silenced,
Could be the end of the world.

For if these fools stay at home,
Who knows what this country would be?
No war for unneeded attention,
Sending their neighbors overseas.

Sounds horrid to the fools,
To cease their progressing complexion.
The world needs to pursue it's justice,
Instead of working for impossible perfection.

-Elizabeth Harris-

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    O.O Holy shit, this is amazing.

    Great use of rhyme and rhythm. Great emphasis of the topic.

    Amazing write. Love it and favoriting it =)

    Plus:

    The fools that address our country,
    The fools living right next door.
    A neighbor to the blind eye of freedom,
    A term overused, abused and sore.

    Intensely the brain of this world,
    Will fade into a foolish stand.
    Already over halfway to recession,
    Becomes worse after each command.

    ^^ Would make an awesome chorus, imo. Love the 'A neighbor to the blind eye of freedom/a term overused, abused and sore." especially.

    Amazing write Elizabeth ^_^ I love it.

    Would give you a 6/5 if I could. :)