Heyy!
im sorry ur feeling so low.. im here if u need to talk...
i loved the emotion, but the rythem went off a few times. it didnt really take me away from bein in ur shoes tho, thats 4 sure ;)
this part was my favorite
"A shell so broken and empty
that a tiny little push would break
A million little pieces that no one will see
because those are the scars that I make"

5/5! come check mine out and comment? thanx! xo
Jescelle (Belle)

Amazing. From every poem that I have read of yours thus far, this one is by far the most amazing. I love it. And I connect with it as well.
If you need anyone to talk to, though you don't know me, I'm here if you need a friend.
10/10 Keep up the amazing work.