Very deep and very dark. I love it
I felt a lot of hurt as i read it and its good to be able to make the reader feel emotion as they read so good job! 5/5
-laura

You have done extremely well writnig this poem, lol. The feelings are so deep, and intense. Sometimes there are those in our lives who should love us.. but who can cause us the deepest pain... which is hard to bear. I can relate to the feelings in this sad write... and pray that God will give you the strength to overcome the feelings of worthlessness that can come about in a situation like this.

Very well written and expresses.
Take care.