Your writing style for this one is really fast , and reads kind of rough some places . I like the idea of how the first kiss leads is kind of a preview .. Because that's more than true . I also like how you ended it with a question , because it's interesting and makes you think . Check the punctuation though .. Cause a couple of them are messed up . 5/5 for this one .

This was an over all good poem. Though it did did seem to be a little rough at some places. The flow was good and the emotion was good as well. So for this poem I give it a good job once again for trying.