by Ren Apr 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Darkness embraces the living, |
by redxiii
Great work def 5/5 keep it up |
by Sammy Nicole
Wow..this is good! |
by Rocky
I really like this. a great example of poetic prose. it had a really good flow to it that was only lost once or twice. but then i know how hard it is to get a perfect flow in a poem like this. i also liked your use of imagery in this poem. i am not personally fimiliar with the poems subject but i can understand the feelings behind cutting and you have also nailed those feelings on the head. so all in all a great write |