I really like this. a great example of poetic prose. it had a really good flow to it that was only lost once or twice. but then i know how hard it is to get a perfect flow in a poem like this. i also liked your use of imagery in this poem. i am not personally fimiliar with the poems subject but i can understand the feelings behind cutting and you have also nailed those feelings on the head. so all in all a great write

ps it is so refreshing to see something on here beside 4 line stanzas with a simple rhyme scheme . god i hate those with a passion so keep it up

Wow..this is good!

~Sammy~

Great work def 5/5 keep it up

Anthony