Wow that is so beautiful i loved it. |
by Lady Nik
Aww this is sweet. I liked it. Nice work. Shanik |
by Hollywood
I liked this. |
Aww. That was so sweet. It was a little short, but I saw it as someone saying it to someone they loved right before they go to sleep. So adorable. :] |
Be happy, and without fright |
Be happy, and without fright |
by Iris
Yes!! i loved it as well!! ^ ^ very well done!! 5/5 |
Aww its sweet. I have one similar to this but you convey your meaning well. good job5/5 |
by Skyfire
Heart-warming! It makes me want to go cuddle someone. |
by LIGURE
Wow.. short but nice.. :] |
Its aweosme... and i love how it ended!! great job! 5/5 |
I love it... i never wrote a love poem hope i can write love poem.. short but full of meaning.. keep it up. love is in the air. |
by victoria
Wow...for a short poem that was very very deep. i felt it. The way i viewed the poem it was kinda like a guy losing his loved one in death and hes telling her things will be okay. a very...forever lasting love. |