I completely know how you feel.. having to constintly hear about someeone.. when you dont want to hear about them.. i think this is my new favorite..

Awesome poem!! love the flow!! 5/5

Honest feelings expressed, how refreshing. Some people we loved hurt us and they can never stay away, always coming back for another chance to hurt some more. Well done. 5/5

Why can't you stay away
I'm tired of your words
None are the truth
They all just hurt.
I'm not your true love
No even a real friend
I'm nothing to you
So please just let this end.

^ I think that's supposed to be not instead of the no. I liked how here, and in the entire piece, you spoke words of truth and allowed your emotions to run freely through paper. I believe that poetry is all about that exactly, and so I am pleased that you did so and created this poem. It was a nice read for me personally and I enjoyed reading a nice poem that came from the heart.

I want to sleep
And not think of the lies you say
I want to be Shanik
Not something that was stained.
I have feelings
Don't I?
Then why keep on stabbing me
Give me time to die.

^ One thing people are really picky about is answering your own questions. I did like this stanza, though. It helped bring the poem together.

My heart can't take this
These pieces are hollow
I'm just one person
Feeling too much sorrow.
I don't want to love you
Don't want to hear you name.
Someone give me a loaded gun
I'm waiting for the bang bang.

^ I really enjoyed how you wrapped it up together for the ending. People don't often bring it down together and it feels broken and leaves readers confused as to what they did, but I liked how yours brought it down together and makes sense. Great ending.

-Bianca :)

Wow, right away it was so strong and bold.
You put the words in the flow very well. There was feeling of desperation as i read and i loved it. I really like when the writer can convey his/her emotions to the reader. Not everyone can do that. very good write 5/5
-laura

Why can't you stay away
I'm tired of your words
None are the truth
They all just hurt.
I'm not your true love
No even a real friend
I'm nothing to you
So please just let this end.

^your speakin your mind and your heart here. your word flow has your were breathin them out. i realie like it. cuz in sum ways i can relate that words hurt more then any hit. n wanting to end the pain by them

I want to sleep
And not think of the lies you say
I want to be Shanik
Not something that was stained.
I have feelings
Don't I?
Then why keep on stabbing me
Give me time to die.

^I love poems qith questions cuz it makes me think of tryin to answer but yet cant. everyone tried of lies in their life but what can u do but just hear them n try not them effect you. it's hard to say.

My heart can't take this
These pieces are hollow
I'm just one person
Feeling too much sorrow.
I don't want to love you
Don't want to hear you name.
Someone give me a loaded gun
I'm waiting for the bang bang.

^ awesome poem indeed . i love every word n i trulie wouldnt change a thing or word. amazing job
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I love how your title matches your last line
the feeling is powerful and intense.
i could feel the sorrow and heartache as i read it.
this poem expresses how so many of us feel and so little of us admit.
great job
5/5

This is an awesomely written poem!

This is an awesomely written poem!

My heart hurting reading this knwing pplz have hurt u like this baby

I like this one too =) it gives me the impression of you demanding to be released of this person. it's like i can hear your voice and i haven't heard you speak. another well deserved 5/5

I like the way you put it and i understand what you are saying