by Not Enough Apr 10, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
*** Not sure what category to put it in. So yeah. |
by Love Panda
Loved it to the end! x |
It's a good poem, but not great. Each line seems to be too long, which makes the reader bored and doesn't compell them to read it. Ansd, although I am extremly happy you see perfection, the entire poem seems to be very narcassictic, and it is very difficult for the reader to get into a poem so self-centered. |
Wow i actually love this poem so many girls now a days only ponder the things they think are wrong with their bodies and if you want to find imperfection, it will be there. It was unique to watch or read someone admiring the assets God has blessed them with! I think it is great that you can cherish the amazing parts about your figure. If you are confident about the way you look others will be as well! |
by Lori
You are a very talented writer! I love this poem. I love it. You have confidence in yourself and I love it. You pick out every feature of yourself and say something good about it. I love it. It's brilliant. And many people don't have the confidence to write something like this. And it makes me happy women still have the confidense in them. |
by Gasttlee
This is a poem I think people would be inspired to read. You bring out a lot of passion and confidence in the writing. It flows perfectly. 5/5 |