Very very very well done! A fantastic write, with perfect flow, rythym and the meaning of this poem was easy to understand, without you having to tell us ;P

It was wrapped up very nicely. 6/5 (if possible)

Wow this soo goood.... it had a really niice flow to it and ^^ yeh it was easy to understand.. =D good job 5/5

Nobody's perfect, and this said expressed it to a tee. Well done, I liked it :)