Comments : Deceit and Misconceptions. (Collab)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is really a very sad poem....
    I don't know what else to say accept I don't know anyone like that, or maybe I am just blind to it.
    It was written beautifully, though.

    Good job to you both,

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Unfortunately, I do know people like this and they can make your life miserable. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Maddy

    This is always such a sad situation when you find out someone you thought you could trust deceives you. you two work so well as a team. great job :) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps and TJ
    The two of you did a really good job on this collab...reading it feels like going back 30 years (Wow I didn't realize it had been that long LOL ) to High school days. Very sad.

    Prancing around striving for attention,
    Affable advice departs from your lips,
    welcoming souls to soak in words
    of wisdom, various friendships bloom.

    I have known a few people like this in my life.

    Fake are these buds that seem genuine.
    Deceit and misconceptions sprout forth,
    spreading untruth and dripping honey,
    poisoned with ignorance.

    That's the worst part the sweetness they use to hurt others all the time smiling.

    Lurking behind backs of the innocent,
    with a smirk of evilness oblivious to many.
    Interfering within lives, invading privacy,
    loyalty is destroyed, special bonds lost
    ...as a result of distrust.

    You guys hit this right on :)
    Excellent Job!
    ((hugs))
    Cindy