by Ingrid
About this subject I could write a book and I probably will, once both my parents have died. |
by Krista
Thanks for writing this for me Temps. |
by Sylvia
Physical abuse and mental abuse are both disgusting. Physical abuse hurts, eases, heals, leaves scars on the skin. Mental abuse, hurts, nevers eases, leaves scars on the physche that never heal. You have done an excellent job with this. I am glad to see you growing in your writing, proud to be a part of it by reading your work. |
by Cindy
Temps you have brought a very sad subject to light...abuse of any kind is wrong.....I think it hurts less to be hit then to have someone emotionaly abuse you. |
by Gizmo
Firstly, its a very well written poem although a very serious topic i can see why the title is so blunt but possibly you could change the title i don't no make it more appealing for the reader and eye catching, maybe a line from your poem as every line you have write has been like its own unique poem in a sense. |
by Lu
Insolence spirals from vile tongue, |