I found it to be quite bland and unexciting. You fail to capture any sense of the event, you just state evenets on a monotonic way. Also, both your flow and rhyme scheme faulter at multiple points in the short poem.

Peace and properity,

(RKD)

It kinda sounded like you're not really excited about grad. I liked the poem, though. I think even if it was a little "monotone", it gave the poem some character. Keep writting!

-mandy :)

I duno, i liked it. =) like you said, it was quite forced in places. But it made me think about when i graduate next year. I cant wait for it. =) lol. Anyway i think, (for having writers block) it was pretty good. Nice work.