by Jessica Apr 11, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Daddy why do you hit us is it because we make you mad, |
by P00ki3B3ar
You did a great job on it its sad it brought tears to my eyes thats very sad =( but overall i thought it was good i gave you 5/5 |
by Vicki
It is so powerful and i could connect to that poem as if i wrote it myself, you did a great job on this poem...... |
Wow i almost cried. this poem is so sad. no father should say those kinds of things or do that stuff. nice but sad poem. |