Wow i almost cried. this poem is so sad. no father should say those kinds of things or do that stuff. nice but sad poem.

It is so powerful and i could connect to that poem as if i wrote it myself, you did a great job on this poem......

You did a great job on it its sad it brought tears to my eyes thats very sad =( but overall i thought it was good i gave you 5/5

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