"Remember what we've done,
never forget my tears -
they've fallen for you."

These opening lines were good but I thought they were a bit cliche. This beginning didn't nearly capture the reader as much as hoped. Some of the words you used here are written so often, try something more creative and captivating, the opening lines are very important as they bring and draw the reader into the scene which you create.

"appreciate me,
and i'll appreciate you."

"i'll" should be "I'll".

I felt this ending to be very weak, and not powerful wording. In my opinion, this was more like a quote to me, and I just didn't get much off of it.

I liked what you were saying and you did express yourself, but I suggest going back over this piece and elaborating on it much more

4/5 from me, take care....

Happy Easter!

~MaryAnne

A very nice personification of tears that nearly always fall in love relationships. The poem also reflects how useless they seem when a lover fails to appreciate them. A lot is said in this small package

well done