Wonderful poem.

This poem is probably the best out of the ones I have read. It has a pretty good flow, but it kind of gets lost near the end. I like the way you started with 'in my world,' the whole idea is unique. I don't quite understand the last part though. Starting at "Darkness never enter." And the last line I really don't understand. Other than that it was a good poem.

Soda E>

Awwwww everyone wish it could be true....(am I in your world) lol hahah areally nice poem...Love the way that your speaking out of you mind and your imagination truly great =]

This was so sad...I really liked it though. once again i feel honesty when I read your work. Very deep and emotional. Shanik

This was sad, everyone wishes there was a world like that... mine is made of candy haha... antways good piece.. and thanks for the comments!!

Aww what a sweet but sad poem I would love to be in your world!!! 5/5

Your world is true , but everyone have to be on contact with the outer space so we will appreciate our world when we see what going on outside , no body was happy before meeting pain :)

I am glad that I am not the only one who thinks this please keep writing