This is a really good poem.. i love it.. cuz its that good..

I love it, it kept me reading. I can say that i can totally understand what your saying. Ive been through it recently again, kinda. It flows well, and your wording was kept simple. Short but swet. I enjoyed it. 5/5 keep it up

Another brilliant piece, this poem flows really well. At the begining i can imagine how the boy looks like, seems like an angel to me ".... Cream soft skin, Oceanic deep brown eyes who has an angelic heart beating within ". That clearly describes how nice a person the boy is. This makes the reader really like this subject. "the boy makes me light like a star, words slay my harm ", this builds his character more, shows how much he cares and how much love he had for you. So sorry you hurt him in a way but hope all goes well. Brilliant write.