by ChrisT Apr 12, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Deserts and Oceans |
by Lofallenve
I can relate to this poem in almost every way. You are excellent with your words. :) 5/5 |
by ibelievedhim
Aw are you sad? I love this poem and I feel so much emptiness, and maybe some fear and confusion. It's very well written with a great rhyme scheme and great word choice to convey the emotions. I felt as if I were on a roller coaster. It's beautiful, 5/5 :) |