Comments : One Day

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was indeed an original poem, Silvia.
    I know the poems and the people of whom you speak too.
    I write about other people too in my poems, but usually don't give away names, unless it is a friendship poem, because of the privacy issue. I am sure they both agree with you posting this, it's such a lovely poem. I hope all will work out well for our friends as well:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    I could see how that poem was an insperation to you....it is a really beautiful poem. You did a great job with yours.
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    This is WONDERFUL Sylvia - A very visual and visceral poem. I felt as though I were the artist painting. Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the feel of this poem. It takes the mind
    back in time..beautifully written with a soft
    flow.

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    Sylvia, you've done a beautiful job with this piece.The way you blend in the french word I think was sweet and add to it's overall beauty.
    Beautiful and well penned.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Sylvia, this is musing indeed.

    You have allowe the reader truely experience the wonder of your mind as you create a piece of art about a piece of art/ an image. Words are your colours to help create such a vivid imagery, imagery that your passion has breathed life into, making it a multi-dimential piece.

    Well done

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good work. i really like to read this

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Magnificent Write, Enjoyed!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Janice Herzog

    Dear Sylvia: This is so beautifully written, and comes right from your heart! Love, Janjan xoxo