Ode, to Your Nakedness!!!

by Robert Gardiner   Apr 13, 2009


(This is a poem I've wanted to write for a while now. Ever since I discovered that there was this Gloriously Sensual, Exquisitely Beautiful, and Incredibly Well Written Poem by Pablo Neruda, "Ode To A Naked Beauty". After reading it, I just wanted to write one, too. The Subject Matter really intrigued me, but I had no Worthy Subject to serve as Inspiration, No Muse, then I came upon The Beautiful, Naked Vision, Of A Young Starlit in Photos she had taken that were posted on the internet and was Amply Inspired and just had to write. I just had to pay Accolade, to Such Beauty of Form, give Praise to Such Beauteous Delight. How Could I Not Be Bemused, By Such Comely Rapture, Such Pert, Pristine, Perfection? The Vision Of Her, in those photos, Left Me, Transfixed, Besot, Stupefied, and I had to let the Bewitchment, with which I was overcome, overtaken, outpour and cascade on to paper to create a work (poem) that was also Bewitching, So, I looked at Pablo's work, to see what I was striving to accomplish, what well done was, in such a work and then let his work and My Magnificent Muse, Her Nakedness, Serene, Nubile, Inspire Me, Serve As My Inspiration, Encouragement; ENJOY!!!)

Ode, to Your Nakedness!!!

Ode, to Your Nakedness, Your Lovely, Silhouette,
Such Beauty, as yours, Arouses me, so.
Here's, to Your Body, Pleasing, Perfect.
May I Bask, one day, in the Glow,
Of its Alluring, Angelic, Contours.
May I rest, my head, upon, its shores.
You're Absolute, Aesthetic, Perfection,
A Siren, of Rhapsody, A Goddess, from Heaven.
Venus, Aphrodite, Both Fall Short, Of You.
No Such Bliss, as that, which you induce.
Raptured, I Am, Time After Time.
Your Body's Beautiful, Naked Vision, A Wonder, Sublime.

Ode, to Your Anatomy, Ripe and Nubile,
Here's to, Your Femininity, by which, I'm Beguiled.
How I long, to meld, into, your Skin.
Here's to, Its Beauty; Supple, Dainty, and Just, Magnificent.
I Lose, Myself, within, Its Succulence.
It's such, a Captivating, Delight.
Your Body, Such Perfection, A Splendor, to My Eyes.
Spelled, I am, by it, Mesmerized.

Oh, to be, Your Sweat, for it knows, every inch of you.
It traces, your body, as I, so, long to do.
My Hands, they beg, to Caress.
My Lips, they beg, to Kiss.
Amorous Fervor, I Long, To Express,
As I Explore, Every Bit,
Every Inch, of your Beautiful Nakedness, with My Hands... Mouth... Lips... & Tongue.
There's Nothing More I Want,
Than You, Naked, Before Me.
In this World, I could find, No Greater Ecstasy,
Than the Beauteous, Bewitching, Bare Body, of you.
So Intoxicating, it is, that there's Nothing, To Compare It To.
Stupefied, I'm Left. by its each and every Pore and Hue.
Ode, to Your Nakedness, It, I Long, To Meld, Into...

Inspired By Pablo Neruda's, "Ode To A Naked Beauty"

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

Wriiten and Composed on April 8th, 2009.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    A wonderful hymn to the beauty of the feminine form. I loved especialy the lines "Of its Angelic, Aesthetic, Contours.
    May I rest, my head, upon, its shores."
    So much passion here.

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Beautiful and seductive...who would not wish to be admired in this way? Your words speak of longing in it's purity! Excellent!

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I red this poem over and over and each time i could feel the beauty you creates with touching words. Most women who are not satisfied with themselves, if ever they heard words likes these came from the mouth of the one they admire, they will accept themselves for who they are. I admire your writing styles and proper uses of words. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    There's nothing more I want,
    Than you, Naked, before me.

    ^^^
    Ha ha, I have been there too, Robert:) This desire can indeed be overwhelming!

    I love this poem, so much passion, so much desire and admiration displayed:)

    Bravo! * clapping*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Dang! That was so descriptive and alluring.
    It relly amazes me at times that man is able
    to capture a woman's beauty with such power
    and grace..liked the read.