Comments : Ode, to Your Nakedness!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Dang! That was so descriptive and alluring.
    It relly amazes me at times that man is able
    to capture a woman's beauty with such power
    and grace..liked the read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    There's nothing more I want,
    Than you, Naked, before me.

    ^^^
    Ha ha, I have been there too, Robert:) This desire can indeed be overwhelming!

    I love this poem, so much passion, so much desire and admiration displayed:)

    Bravo! * clapping*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I red this poem over and over and each time i could feel the beauty you creates with touching words. Most women who are not satisfied with themselves, if ever they heard words likes these came from the mouth of the one they admire, they will accept themselves for who they are. I admire your writing styles and proper uses of words. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Beautiful and seductive...who would not wish to be admired in this way? Your words speak of longing in it's purity! Excellent!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    A wonderful hymn to the beauty of the feminine form. I loved especialy the lines "Of its Angelic, Aesthetic, Contours.
    May I rest, my head, upon, its shores."
    So much passion here.