by Meena Krish
Dang! That was so descriptive and alluring. |
by Ingrid
There's nothing more I want, |
by kelleyana
I red this poem over and over and each time i could feel the beauty you creates with touching words. Most women who are not satisfied with themselves, if ever they heard words likes these came from the mouth of the one they admire, they will accept themselves for who they are. I admire your writing styles and proper uses of words. Very well done, 5/5, kel. |
by Deana
Beautiful and seductive...who would not wish to be admired in this way? Your words speak of longing in it's purity! Excellent! |
by Fran
A wonderful hymn to the beauty of the feminine form. I loved especialy the lines "Of its Angelic, Aesthetic, Contours. |