by Curing the Comon Cliche Apr 14, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Thoughts leave ripples in my head |
by Jad
This was a really good poem. I liked how you used a boat to go with your emotions. Good job. Austin |
by StandStill
*nods*.. |
This was really good. i loved it. the flow was good and the way you took the first stanza and reused it at the end with some changes was great :) |