Comments : Boats Do Crash

  • 15 years ago

    by waiting for the unknown

    This was really good. i loved it. the flow was good and the way you took the first stanza and reused it at the end with some changes was great :)

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    *nods*..

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a really good poem. I liked how you used a boat to go with your emotions. Good job. Austin