Hey, it is quite sad. I did love the way you wrote it though, you've got an interesting mastery of teh English language. :) Hopefully we can talk more.

I agree with the two above. This was such a well written piece with very emotional ideas. I think the more poems I read the better they become. You are truly a wonderful poet with a growing talent. Keep writing this amazing poem dear, they well take you far in life. Nik