The world we live in now-a-days,
Is going through a horrible faze,
The people in it are denying it all,
And that's when we get to see our world fall,

(This pasrt is so true..i love how you start this)

Government Masks,
Are coming undone,
And we get to see,
Just what they've done,

(Government Maks...great line. Very original)

Society's people turning into greedy; little; hateful; liars,
Making the Clock Of Time tire,
Deception and Deceit,
Is the latest fashion,
The world has just become very ashen,

(Wow..amazing imagery and diction here. i love how the flow changes)

While everyones budget is in sever pain,
CEOs are having it made,
Resources are drying up to a crack,
Now everything is off the beaten track,

(I love the topic of hthis poem. very intelligent anbd a fresh idead. nice work.)

Poverty; Starvation; Rape; and Theft
Now you're seeing our world at its very best,
Were not coming out of this horrible faze,
But thats our world now-a-days

(This was asesome. I loved everything about ti. keep it up. Shanik)