by Jad Apr 14, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I stand here by myself |
by Not Enough
Wow, that was great. I would've liked it a lot better if it was longer though. But it's really good. The emotion is good, but I think if you use more empowering words that it could be better. The flow is good, but the rhyming seems a little forced. good job. |