This was a great poem.keep writing

I know this sounds cliche, but the best is yet to come, w/o suffering there would be no meaning to us, no art no light if not for the shadow, beauty unveiled in your words, don't ever give up on your dreams, this poem moved me to tears with the struggle of mourning and hope. Good job 5/5

Whoa this is a awesome poem u have real talent keep it up never stop wrighting

Okay i suck at commenting....but this was epic...like ....words fall short to praise the poem...strong composition..wait...super strong to say actually.....moved me.....its inspiring.....but the secret ingredient to our life is *PAIN*.....Very well written....and with great intensity ^^,

peace~

You're killing me with these sad poem :( They are sooo good. I'm jealous lol. I don't know how you keep doing it. All of your poems have so much emotion and truth to them. I never get the same story when I read your stuff and that's really great. You write with so much pain and anger, but in such a beautiful way. You have a gift Soda, keep it up ^.^ Nik