All that chat of beer and chocolate got ya thinking eh ... lol

Cute ... made me giggle. A beer drinking, chocolate eating vampire .... lmaoooo

Are you trying to tell us you are a vampire! LOL
This was very cute, I love poems with a snappy rhythm and a little humor...great job!

Ha! This was funny. It really made me laugh because my step-dad is from England and when I took girl scout cookies over my mom's he called them biscuits....Nice job! Thanks for the laugh!

It does conjure some funny imagery to the person who is reading. Well done.

Nice work.. i like how u were able to rhyme all through the poem with out makin it sound bad.. keep it up.. great job!!.. it was a greeat poem to read and makes u smile..