To begin with, I LOVE the movie Mean Girls. I liked the words you used in this. I agree strongly with how it should be played. I realize it's a work in progress. I would try to come up with one of the stanzas as a chorus, and maybe put it between the two sets of lyrics?Just a suggestion, but I've only written a few songs, so you don't need to follow my advice if you don't want to.

Keep working on this. Id love to see the finished product.

Krista

First off I would like to say I totally agree with you and the plastics idea. I love this song/ poem and I agree with vanilla with what she said about the first line very strong and catches the reads attention. And the ending was very good and strong. It backs up your beginning. Like you start off strong and you end strong and got the point across. Great job. If you continue ith it i can't wait to see the rest of it if you add anything...