Lovely flow and rhyme too. A fast paced piece of erotica. Wonderfully written from start to finish, certainly one to be proud of!

Well done :D

I LOVE this !!!
I can't believe how you pen the ending to your poems..few people know how to impress the reader with the closures they create.

Supple senses
Bend with ease
Love must be
A brain disease

I see another S reiteration here, it made the sense of reading the poem so very good !
and I love how you related love to the mind disease, while most of us relate it as a disease of the heart.

Love it!
Well done~