by PygmyPuff Apr 15, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Its all there, |
by Jad
This was another good poem. The flow of the poem was good and the emotion was good. The poem was short but you were able to make it go straight to the point. Good job. |
First of all, I've got to say I loved the title. It's what drew me to this poem. I've always liked using that word in poems. Haha. |
by Lady Nik
This one was good. I think you could have done alot more with the topic...insnaity is a hard one to cover..it could have been a lot creepier. Keep it up. Shanik |