Catch me, Darling.

I could read your poetry forever. I find myself hanging onto every word that you write. Each story a mirror, like it was written for me. And you write in a way that is very unique. I love it. You pour so much emotion into each poem. And btw, im diggin the spelling of your name. Very pretty.

"And it's morning's like these,
that always produce the best words.
When my brain isn't quite awake,
yet there's no way I can sleep."

A great way to open up this piece, I love your wording, it just kept me reading.

"fall..
fall..
fall..
That's all I seem to be doing,
now that you've come into my life,
and I love you for it, darling."

Wow, this was very unique and I loved how you wrote this poem. A very different way to express yourself.

"The rush in my head,
like a needle in my vein,
except for when I crash,
it's going to be a worse pain."

Good rhyming and flow.

"And, no, I wasn't supposed to make that rhyme."

This kind of made me smile, it was a bit off course of your concept.

"Catch me?
Didn't think so."

These two lines were very simple but added a nice touch to the poem.

"I wouldn't want you to anyways."

Change "to" to "now", it will read much better.

"Your hands are too cold,
and you're arms are too strong.
You might crush me, dear."

This was very original I thought, I am just wanting to read more and more.

"....Catch me?"

Loved how the poem ended with this question. This piece was very well written and just left me speechless. Your talent poured through on this one, hanging on each word.

~MaryAnne