The defining force

by Ingrid   Apr 15, 2009


This vessel we live in,
consisting of elements
recycled endlessly
in a closed off system,
called earth.
Tell me:
if you were to take knife
and cut out the essential part
that defines a person..

could you?

In the course of every seven years
all cells in our body are replaced.

Are we still the same person afterwards?

I say yes,
because it is the soul
that steers the body.
Both elusive,

but definably "you"

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow! What an insight you have into the human condition, and how well you have placed these thoughts into a poem! I am impressed!
    Yes, our body may recycle itself every 7 years, until its final death, but our soul does indeed live on forever.
    You have penned a very inspirational poem here Ingrid. I love it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Hmm. this really makes me think. what does make us who we are? at least i am glad that nobody can take it away.
    thanks for sharing
    ~Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by John Long

    Some very interesting philosophical questions raised here. I wonder if we are all an ongoing 'work in progress'?
    I've enjoyed the philosophical questions asked in some of your recent poems, very refreshing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    I like this lesson in both biology and religion.
    Haiku inspired by you!

    In just seven years
    Every cell replenished
    Homo sapiens

    Refreshed of body
    But what of ones mind and soul
    God is our anchor

    M.Moran

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very meaningfull and deep write...

    In the course of every seven years
    all cells in our body are replaced.

    Are we still the same person afterwards?
    ^^
    its not the exterior features that define a person...its our inside... out heart... our soul... but how many people actually look inside a person!!

    because it is the soul
    that steers the body.
    Both elusive,

    but definably "you"

    ^^
    definately... beautifully penned...