by Sylvia
I would have to say no because in order for the soul to have a vessel to live in that vessel must have a heart. I think the heart and soul work together. Good job. |
by Bhavin
Ma'am, |
by Lonely Rider
Very meaningfull and deep write... |
by Mr. Darcy
Ingrid, |
by John Long
Some very interesting philosophical questions raised here. I wonder if we are all an ongoing 'work in progress'? |
by Kuro
Hmm. this really makes me think. what does make us who we are? at least i am glad that nobody can take it away. |
Wow! What an insight you have into the human condition, and how well you have placed these thoughts into a poem! I am impressed! |