hey hun... dun know why anyone would give it a three.... amazing raw emotion... u had me with u ever word... i love all ur poems hun :) ur the greatest :)

thanks Tyler. *kisses* but i wish i could write as well as you! ur an awesome writer

Wow Amy...this was a great poem!!! You had me with every word well. Also, I could relate. Wonderful job! You're such a talented writer!!!
Luv,
Amy

wow, that poem deserves nothing but a 5...that was so tragic, and beautiful...I feel the same way! I havent seen my dad in a long time, but all the sh!t that you described. I went through. It really was an amazing poem. So GREATLY written, you are a very talented writer, I have read alot of your work. I only comment on poems that I truely believe deservve it. I definitely gave u a 5...that was sduch a wonderful poem...i'm speechless

love,
Danielle

haha well i guess i'm not speechless since i wrote that long paragraph

Thanks everyone for the coments! it really means a lot.

I know what its like to have an abusive/drunk mother. Cant ever say that my father was the same way. my father was the one who took care of me. so in a way i know exactly what your going through. And in another way, its totaly different. keep up the great writting. And just remember, no matter how Sh!tty the dad may seem on the outside, hiding behind the booze and the drugs, hes a great guy on the inside... not behind the booze and drugs.

-courtney-