Diminished

by Jad   Apr 15, 2009


I've been whittled down
And I have found
That I have been used
And that my spirit is about to be loosed

I have been thrown away
Listening to what the liars had to say
Being led that I'm not real
And now thats now I feel

I will soon be gone
And it will not be long
For I can feel myself fading
So now I'm steadily waiting

Waiting for my imminent fate
That I'm beginning to hate
But it will soon not matter
For my life is about to shatter

I'm now diminished
This life is finished
I fade to nothingness I guess
Leaving out the rest

So it ends with this
And I guess I do miss
The feelings of love and happiness and being with my friends
But I'm diminished and I will never again see a helping hand

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  • 15 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    The title really capture my attention and it sure didn't dissapoint me. Well I like the idea that you have penned down ending your life in a non suicidal manner.

    Waiting for my imminent fate
    That I'm beginning to hate
    But it will soon not matter
    For my life is about to shatter
    ^^ This stanza really stood out for me. As the reader i can feel you, just waiting for the moment your life to shatter.

    Great piece of work

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