The title really capture my attention and it sure didn't dissapoint me. Well I like the idea that you have penned down ending your life in a non suicidal manner.

Waiting for my imminent fate
That I'm beginning to hate
But it will soon not matter
For my life is about to shatter
^^ This stanza really stood out for me. As the reader i can feel you, just waiting for the moment your life to shatter.

Great piece of work