by PygmyPuff Apr 16, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Your face dances across my eyelids, |
by Jad
This was a nice poem. And the imagery was good. the emotion in it was good. the flow was good as well. There was nothing really wrong with this poem and the only thing i would change is how short it is. Good Job. |
by Lady Nik
I liked this..it makes me wonder. Nice work. Shanik |