Wow.. thats sad.. well done with it being a short poem. very expressive.

Short but so powerful! I love the emotion you put into this.

My favorite lines were:
But our memories cannot be erase.
broken bottles you always chase.

It reminds me of someone tossing a bottle out to sea and putting a letter inside for someone to rescue them.

&&
You kissed mo gently.
you killed me slowly.

once again short but powerfull
There were some minor spelling mistakes
5/5