Before and After

Love it.

Got the feelin I am feelin now.

"Sunny days, warm but chilly nights,
Happiness that will never end,
blissful."
`I loved this, just a great beginning, filled with happiness. :]

"But all good things come to an end,
tears, but I won't understand why
he left."
`Wow you sure jerked the reader from such a happy start to something very sad filled.

"Never thinking that it would end,
my world came visibly crashing,
questions."
`I think that when we lose someone we literally do feel like our world is coming crashing down, and we have those questions still lingering, wondering why things went wrong and why. Loved this Krista.

"Heart breaking in twisted pieces,
eyes bloodshot from too much crying,
wish on."
`Your words are so relateable.. I can relate to this.. eyes being bloodshot and basically crying hours on end.

"And then the sun got even brighter,
warming up my frozen, cold mind.
A chance."
`Here we are at happy again, but I like that, it makes the reader that more interested in your poem and is filled with suspense.. it makes the reader wonder if this will turn out to be a happy ending or not.

"Once again finding my smile,
a reason to let out a laugh,
No tears."
`Yaay happiness. :]

"I could lie, say I'm not happy,
but that wouldn't be the full truth.
Loving."
`Everyone deserves to be happy :] Never lie about being happy.

"I found another great person,
of course this will last much longer,
full hope."
`Loved the optimism at the end! Never give up hope. I'm glad you are full of hope and are hoping things work out. :]

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Well done

5/5.