"Darling you've got to understand
More you tighten the noose, harder I'll resist"

Wow you summed up exactly what I'm feeling right now in your poem. Very well written. I loved it.

Jenni this is an amazing poem, your words of truth shine in this poem, every couple fights, and people need to know that even though sometimes bad words are chosen to describe feelings that, our better half will always be our better half, our forever will always be our forever, amazing poem, loved the word choice and flow, you're great

keep it up 5/5

kerry