I really like this poem. I think most of us have felt this way in some part of our life.
The only thing that I feel that I am missing in this poem is feelings. If you understand what I mean.

I enjoyed the concise nature of each line. A few words can say much and isn't that what poetry is all about.

I really loved this poem, i can just imagine a scared, shy little girl who's only escape is through her dreams and imagination.....wow it just blew me away, the flow was great and word chioce was amazing...you are a great writer

I really loved this poem, i can just imagine a scared, shy little girl who's only escape is through her dreams and imagination.....wow it just blew me away, the flow was great and word chioce was amazing...you are a great writer