Comments : A lapse of memory

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A lovely message you have given us in this poem. Not to live in the past, move forward with your life. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Kel:)

    Yes you are so right: continiously looking back can affect us negatively. Just learn from mistakes and then move on without looking back is much, much better..I could not agree more!

    Search joy to cast away sorrows
    Believed that there'll be a pleasant tomorrow

    ^^
    The lines I loved most, for they are so wise:)

    I have missed your poems!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Yes... U r right... And one of the facts that you never knew... Your poem is far more better than mine... Because this poem provides a ray of hope...

    Well written...

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    These are such motivating words... encouraging us to live on... living life king-size ;)

    "Think of these words sometimes
    Every emotion is just a slice of life
    Why constantly returning in the past?
    It's time to surpass. "

    ^^loved how you have described each emotion as slice of life... it indeed is ... past is gone ... never to return back... then why should we bother... very beautifully penned...

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice thought provoking poem. Living in the past can be a very painful thing.
    Good job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Kel, Great Write!!!