by xx Apr 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
There is a girl who smiles lots, |
by SheenaMarie
I love the fourth stanza...great write 5/5 |
Very well written. Love the flow of the words and the whole concept of the writing. |
by Marissa Anne
Wow i so agree with shattered dreams!! this was an amazing poem and i really enjoyed reading it<3 this poem makes me want to look at more of your work!!! keep it up |
Woah, i really enjoyed reading this, even though it was sad, it was filled with so much emotion i just couldn't stop reading. |