Woah, i really enjoyed reading this, even though it was sad, it was filled with so much emotion i just couldn't stop reading.
I loved the rhyming and it was greatly written.

5/5

Wow i so agree with shattered dreams!! this was an amazing poem and i really enjoyed reading it<3 this poem makes me want to look at more of your work!!! keep it up
5/5

Very well written. Love the flow of the words and the whole concept of the writing.

I love the fourth stanza...great write 5/5